ComUnit's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[DingDongVG]

Love this rendition of DingDong

[Aphelion Ghost Fleet Valley volume two part 3 of 4]

I do like the simplistic style. To give a more indepth review id have to know the tone you were going for or the tone of the comic itself. However I wish you the best with your series!

BaconBob9000 responds:

For the tone I’m mostly going for a action adventure theme mixed with intrigue

[Hi-Fi Rush Baby!]

Im a sucker for cell shading a sharp lines of varying line weight. Absolutely fantastically rendered and I am now following you. Great work!

StevSteelEn responds:

Thanks so much!!

[Kitten]

The whole scene is pretty cute, good work! Something you can keep in mind for your next one is applying shadows based on your light sources. For example you have light coming through the window onto the floor which looks good, however the cat should be blocking some of that light based on where its standing. Great work! When you make more I'd like you to share it on the thread so I can see!

[Year of the Rabbit 2023, with Bokko Bunny]

The body looks good. Responding to what you wrote on the thread i dont see why anyone would hate you, or this piece for how it looks. I would recommend on future drawings to consider perspective on 45-ish degree angle face like this one. The left eye would be slightly farther away from the camera than the one on the right and because it seems spherical it would be vertically squished a bit more. Its best to draw a cross on the face to help you keep facial elements aligned. For example if yiu moved the nose a bit higher and under the gap between the eyes it would definitely have a positive impact and give the face more depth.

Keep on going! Good work!

[Doing a Little Cat Witchcraft]

I like the cats design, its pretty cute! I feel like if you play around with shading and color then you can make future pieces POP a bit more to add some depth and make the characters design shine more. You got this! Good work!

[eye to lonely eye]

I REALLY like how this all looks. Great attention to detail. Good work!

[Scooby Doo: Private Eye]

Very stylish! I always appreciate varying line widths to give art more personality.

[Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss]

My girlfriend love sailor moon, and I've been watching it with her for a while. We left off at Sailor Moon R so far. I love the detail and color choices in this piece, it really does feel ethereal and magical. I get the impression her power is so immense that it's meant to be almost blinding and hard to truly grasp as there are many elements obscuring a lot of Moon, which I would normally mark as a negative as its hard to focus on certain details, I think it makes sense in this context. I would recommend for future works to consider making the lighting more consistent on any figure in the scene. What I mean is I cant tell by looking where the light source falling on Moon is coming from, as I can see rays coming from the top, but the top of the wing on the right is darkened, and the front of Moon is well lit while the top of her head is mostly dark too. Something to consider, but otherwise it looks great!

[Damascus]

This style and design looks pretty nice and I genuinely think this would work for animation.