ComUnit's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[24 November 2024]

Beautiful!

[twig]

Adorable! Absolutely love your style.

[Zelda]

lol I was thinking "Hey what a nice piece! very pretty!" and then I looked at the reflection... and it got better.

[Megatron]

Quality work!

[Radish Ant]

Love it!

[DingDongVG]

Love this rendition of DingDong

[Aphelion Ghost Fleet Valley volume two part 3 of 4]

I do like the simplistic style. To give a more indepth review id have to know the tone you were going for or the tone of the comic itself. However I wish you the best with your series!

BaconBob9000 responds:

For the tone I’m mostly going for a action adventure theme mixed with intrigue

[Hi-Fi Rush Baby!]

Im a sucker for cell shading a sharp lines of varying line weight. Absolutely fantastically rendered and I am now following you. Great work!

StevSteelEn responds:

Thanks so much!!

[Kitten]

The whole scene is pretty cute, good work! Something you can keep in mind for your next one is applying shadows based on your light sources. For example you have light coming through the window onto the floor which looks good, however the cat should be blocking some of that light based on where its standing. Great work! When you make more I'd like you to share it on the thread so I can see!

[Year of the Rabbit 2023, with Bokko Bunny]

The body looks good. Responding to what you wrote on the thread i dont see why anyone would hate you, or this piece for how it looks. I would recommend on future drawings to consider perspective on 45-ish degree angle face like this one. The left eye would be slightly farther away from the camera than the one on the right and because it seems spherical it would be vertically squished a bit more. Its best to draw a cross on the face to help you keep facial elements aligned. For example if yiu moved the nose a bit higher and under the gap between the eyes it would definitely have a positive impact and give the face more depth.

Keep on going! Good work!